Comments on: The River

By: Dora Hawk

Dora Hawk — Fri, 19 Feb 2010 03:59:25 +0000

I love the story. Almost brought a tear to my eye.

By: Tristan Ap

Tristan Ap — Wed, 10 Feb 2010 01:49:29 +0000

This is a great story.

I like that you were able to get a message across in such a short space.

By: Dan Steiner

Dan Steiner — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 23:42:24 +0000

Thanks for the feedback, y’all.

Really digging that proverb, Glen.

By: Glen Ma

Glen Ma — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 02:06:06 +0000

Wow great story. I think it really exemplifies the struggle people face with change in their lives, and the value of cherishing every moment of life.

It reminds me of a proverb from Heraclitus, which he stated, “No man ever steps in the same river twice, for it’s not the same river and he’s not the same man.”

By: elsa.woods

elsa.woods — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 03:23:17 +0000

I like it Dan. It’s really great!

By: Agastya Bharadwaj

Agastya Bharadwaj — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 05:02:38 +0000

Really good story, keep up the good work!